Essay Fail.
Apr. 22nd, 2012 07:38 pmDear Student,
the interesting text about important historical events that you found on-line is a fictitious diary. It is not a good idea to copy entire passages from it that then somehow end up - nearly word for word - in your exam paper. Apart from the fact that the style is off - your text should be written factually and without embellishment - it does not help that you managed to leave out the dates (helpfully provided as headlines) and mangled several important terms.
If you cheat, at least do it with better source material.
A teacher who knows how to google.
the interesting text about important historical events that you found on-line is a fictitious diary. It is not a good idea to copy entire passages from it that then somehow end up - nearly word for word - in your exam paper. Apart from the fact that the style is off - your text should be written factually and without embellishment - it does not help that you managed to leave out the dates (helpfully provided as headlines) and mangled several important terms.
If you cheat, at least do it with better source material.
A teacher who knows how to google.